Two Girls Walk Into A Bar

Hey guys!

I wrote this in response to this prompt I found on reddit, and thought I would share it with all of you.

I hope you enjoy what I’ve written, and if you wanted to try it out, head on over and see what you can come up with!

Two Girls Walk Into A Bar

“Vino blanco?”
I am echoed,
she is served first,
sips and strikes up something.
We have Cádiz in common,
but not exploration.
I’ve returned weary,
my eyes benching baggage,
nightcap and nap are miles away,
because she talks,
and she talks,
and she talks.
I am talking to myself.
Listening,
chained to the conversation,
dragged on the back of a verbal moped.
I’ve always heard I talk too much,
I hear it on delay,
long after I am done talking,
she suffers the same affliction.
We share a scar,
car accident,
back of the neck,
please don’t ask further.
I have more,
from wilderness wandering,
and her left ring finger is decorated,
with the one treasure I never found.


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7 responses to “Two Girls Walk Into A Bar”

  1. I might try out writing prompts. It’s a cool idea, thanks for the tip! Great work as always 😉

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